Our world

This is my Dark world deck any suggestions on how to make it faster? You r/f mine ill r/f yours... and yea here it is .

Deck name: Our world
# of cards: 41

Objective: Try to summon my dark world monsters as quick as possible to get as close to an OTK as possible and if need be keep my opponents field clear so i can atk.

Monsters:
Broww x2
Brron x3
Doom shaman
DMOC
Goldd x3
Silva warlord x3
Gren x2
Kahkii
Morphing


Spells:
Allure
Vortex
COSR x3
Dark world lightning x2
Dark world road x3
dark world dealings x2
card destruction
The cheerful Coffin
Heavy
Typhoon
premature burial
reborn

Traps:
fine
Forces of drakness
cylinder
mirror force
torrential
Magic drain

I personnaly hate Dark World decks, I think they're noobish
also, u got 2 burials (prem and burial :p)
i think none of them are needed anyways..
you could just try to go for more from hand to grave cards, or what is it..

Lol those are different burials btw. One is foolish burial the other is premature guess i should put that up there, but yea I think i have enough draw engines, If i add more then i wont be able to get my monsters and I would have all dead draws. And i want a way to get my silva/goldd to my hand quicker so i can use my draw and discarding cards.

-1 Allure
-1 Card Trader
-1 Foolish Burial
-1 D.D. Revival

+1 Cheerful Coffin
+2 Fine
+1 Beige

Try adding Creator Cards so u can discard a Dark World and get him SS and then get a card from your Graveyard

Kidd: I was thinking about adding another coffin' And yea id drop card trader for that, but I like that beige idea may not drop allure for it though and 2 cheerful cofins is over doing it.... I could side on though again 2 fine's would be over doing I d have no hand by the time im done :\. But one would be great. And yea ill drop foolish dont need it.

Celtic: I would but creator doesnt fit the deck theme i would have to add an incarnate cuase im nto trying to trib monster for creater's effect.

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i thought the theme was a rush deck....2 monsters after u summon Creator (which altogether is 3 BTW) isnt rushing?

It would only make my deck faster IF i can get him out on the field and I dotn want that IF chance to be a factor. Amd besides like i said he doesnt fit the deck theme in any way shape or form. His type isnt dark, he not a fiend. The only good is that i can special summon a monster from my grave but the thing is i wont have that many monsters my grave unless they are wear.( I.E. Brrow) But I was thinking about adding a cyber valley to this deck any suggestions or takes on that idea?

Creator's effect doesn't activate Dark World effects anyway. His effect "sends a card to the graveyard", rather than "discarding a card", so their effects don't activate.

Yea what he said, but any other suggestions?

You might what want to add some gren's and more kahkki's too for monster and spell destruction. I dont think 2 fines and Cheerful coffins wouldn"t be over doing it when u run like 2 kahkki's and 2 gren's and 2 or 3 of the other good DW cards.

I really think a 3rd dark world road is good. That card is so good it's almost broken.

Ask Kidd what my road did to his Judgement Dragon

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